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A group of Greymons travelling through the desert for food ;)
I have the feeling something is missing in the picture :C please leave crits in the critiques box!



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:iconmuggle-angel:
I never understoud why they were called Greymon, when they're mostly orange!?
:iconredbuzzardd:
Its a misspelling of the english word "Great"

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:iconpalone-omi:
The bird looks like... Zazu? :XD: Anyway, This looks cool. I love the lighting on that front figure. Not so sure about the text, though.

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:iconredbuzzardd:
yep its Zazu xD

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:iconblack-pteri:
I'm not subscribed, so I can't critique 'officially' but this is what I think :3

Firstly, this is a wonderful piece :)
The greymon in the front is wonderfully done, but you might want to pay more attention to shading. Areas such as the forearms and the claws on the toes seem to be getting too much light, especially when you see that the sun is setting. See how you have shadowed his tail quite dark? You should either make that lighter, or make the rest of the shading darker, the shadows throughout the entire piece should match, as there is only one light source. In a similar way, the other greymon should be shaded in the same effect. The 'hills' of sand where his claws have dug in also seem to have highlights, when really they shouldn't.

The two greymon in the background seem a little rushed to me. The one on the left hand side of the picture seems quite bulky and awkward, and his arms seem a bit short compared to the figure in the front. The one on the right appears to be a different colour? If this is on purpose, it still should have more distinguished highlights. It doesn't seem to have as much contrast as the other two. Also, his face seems shorter than the other two greymon's faces. Is his other horn supposed to be missing?

One last thing, is the shadows. If the sun were close, the shadows would be fine, as the shadows move away from the source of light. However, as the sun is so far away in real life, there probably shouldn't be that much difference in the angle of each shadow. The shadow of each greymon should be pointing in the same direction.

Good work though, it's looking fantatic!

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:iconredbuzzardd:
thanks very much! This helped me very much! I will edit it in PS and will work more on the shadows :)

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:iconblack-pteri:
No worries :3
Hope I made sense XD

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I'm not subscribed, so I can't post in the critique box ^^; but I'm going to give it a try

The Greymon in the foreground is very well done. The only thing is that the forearms should have more shadow on them, since he is facing away from the sunset. Also the claws should have some more shading on them too.

The two Greymon in the back is ok, except the one on the left looks kind of chubby. Also its arms are kind off. It sorta looks like he's missing his left arm, but you're still somehow able to see the claw. The Greymon on the right is alright. He's neck seems a bit chunky though, but it doesn't look though bad. The only other thing I can say is the maybe the two Greymon in back could have bit more detail, since the Greymon in the front has a lot detail on it. Also two Greymon horns seem kinda small compared to their heads.

I really hoped this helped in anyway. This is a very wonderful pic of the Greymon in the desert though. I also really like how it looks like one of the Greymon is about shot down Zazu with a nova blast XD

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